It's a shame I didn't care for this story. I thought that it had a lot of potential, but it felt like it was hastily put together and the story was rushed through. I thought the Eileen Telford's Elmer, the Christmas Elf could become a Christmas classic for children, but it has a ways to go to meet that standard.Elmer tries to be a good elf, but finds that he is better at getting in the way than he is at being helpful. The Master Elf lends Elmer a hand and teaches him to carve wood. The ending became kind of obvious to me as I was reading but I liked where the story ended up. I hope that the author sticks with the story and works to improve it. I want to recommend it and I think with some edits I could.
Happy Reading!
-Melly
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